Unfortunately, I wasn't lucky enough to have any feedback on my first Elevator Pitch assignment, so there weren't any notes for me to take and consider in this second attempt. However, here is the new elevator pitch!
https://fgilday.blogspot.com/2019/03/create-customer-avatar.html
That's unfortunate that you were unable to get any feedback from your previous elevator pitch, but I'm pretty sure you did an amazing job! Also, the link to your elevator pitch seems to be broken you should get that fixed for the future. Personally, what makes the elevator pitches so fun for me is when I add a little bit of humor so its enjoyable for me to make and my audience to watch!
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